Blossoming

A budding career
Swiftly, it blossoms: "But why?"
You eye my breasts. "Oh."

13 thoughts on “Blossoming”

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Le Coin de Mel says:
March 27, 2014 at 10:14 pm

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Ha! Absolutely stunning shot. Mel

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- Abby Boid says:
  April 1, 2014 at 7:32 pm
  
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  Thanks Mel. x
  
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trentpmcd says:
March 27, 2014 at 11:41 pm

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I like the haiku, disturbing as it is.

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- Abby Boid says:
  April 1, 2014 at 7:31 pm
  
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  Thank you Trent
  I was not at all sure how it would come across (disturbing, mildly amusing or otherwise). In the end, I thought I’d let the reader decide. So thank you for letting me know.
  
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  - trentpmcd says:
    April 1, 2014 at 10:37 pm
    
    One of the things that makes it so good is it came across in different ways. I guess what is disturbing, beyond succeeding for reasons other than those you’d wish, is the implication that he (or I guess it cold be “she”) might want to do more than just look.
    
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  - Abby Boid says:
    April 2, 2014 at 6:44 am
    
    Thanks for letting me know how you read it. Really interesting and really encouraging too. Thank you again.
    
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